Rough Cut

Once editing our rough cut was finished, we asked our peers to share their thoughts on the clip, on what they found most effective or where we could improve. From the feedback we received, we concluded that we needed a font change, especially when the title emerges, as it looks unprofessional, and not effective for the genre we wished to imitate. Another point was that the scream to connote the victim's death was not at all realistic, and seemed more comical. This was an important part that we wanted to change, as it ruined a clip we needed perfect in order for the audience to understand the plot.